These past few weeks we have been reading our five part paragraphs in front of the class while they critique our paragraphs.This is no problem for those people who are fine with talking in front of the class but for the rest like my self it's not a happy experience. Common negative critiques on the class are little things like spelling or the order of the quotes even not having any page numbers. Some common positive critiques that came up were having lots of detailed CM, and having well chosen vocabulary.
For my paragraph to get better I need to work on embedding my quotes. I didn't even focus on embedding my quotes so I think if I actually focus on it then it will be an easy fix. Another thing I could fix would be to proof read my paper before turning it in. So if I embed my quotes and proof read my paragraph I believe my five part paragraph will really improve.
